I know, that was complicated for an explanation. I keep seeing it in my minds eye. The first page a drawing of a guy (and oh my lord my google searches must be throwing red flags, be careful how you google stuff *eye roll*) has his back to a wall in a room, a child clinging to him, on his haunches, he has been injured…shot several times.
One of the coolest tools out there to keep writers moving, is to be part of NANOWRIMO (National Novel Writing Month) is a non profit, dedicated to getting writers writing. I find it to be an amazing tool.
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